Star Gazing Part Deaux

When I got home from work this evening I was anxious to re-do the "Star Gazing" piece. (See first attempt in previous entry.) I think this one is better, but again I have spots that I do not care for. Using a straight-edge definately made a difference with the border. What do you think? I added color to version 1 and will also color this one at some point. This time, instead of using colored pencils I might give this one a watercolor wash. Hmmmm, that might be interesting.